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This moment in time
Held in the hands of dusk
Gazing at the love in your eyes
Sounds of chaos fill the air
Our eyes held in a loving stare
Sky lit up
With painful cries
Wrapped in each other's arms
Only moments left
Until we die
One last kiss
From your sweet lips
One last breath
Laced with your scent
No time left
To fix the wrong
No tomorrow
To heal the sorrow
Only now
In your arms and mine
Our love is protected
Shielded by our bodies, entwined
No other way I'd rather die
Than looking into your eyes
The last words I hear
Your voice in my ear, whispering
"I'll love you forever"
©2007-2009 ~motleypoisongirl
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This was inspired by a news article I read. Here's the [link]
Here's another version of the same story. [link]
The picture came from the news article.

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:iconjeremy10678:
cute i like it

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:iconmotleypoisongirl:
Thnx... I wasn't going for cute though. :| Lol.

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lol sorry

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No it's ok! You don't have to be sorry. I wrote this to kind of relive the last moments of those people's lives. I think it's amazing how their love survived even in death. Love is so precious and beautiful. To me, cute just isn't something I would use to describe love, lol. But it's ok. I'm glad you liked it anyways. =) Some things about love are cute. Like holding hands, and little random kisses, suffocating each other with bear hugs, tickle fights, making each other laugh by being silly... those are cute things about love.
But when I'm writing about death... I just don't think of cute... lol, sorry. =P

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lol yea

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